We were learning to use good description words in our writing, and follow the poem structure.
I found it easy to follow the poem structure.
I found it hard to come up with ideas for my poem.
I really enjoyed thinking of all the fun things I did during lockdown.
Next time I need to explain my words better!
Kia ora, Helena! I enjoyed reading about your lockdown experience through your 'Hello, Goodbye' poem. You have made some great vocabulary choices in your writing - I could see your mum getting you all ready in the morning based on your description. Next time, could you add a background to your slide?
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I never really put backgrounds on my slides, but maybe I will next time.
I agree Ms Helena's hello and goodbye poem is very good.
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ReplyDeleteKia ora. My name is Helena and I attend Mangapapa school in Gisborne, Tairāwhiti. Thank you for your comment on my Hello goodbye writing.
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